2016新SAT官方写作样文解析

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  样文1

  Prompt

  As you read the passage below, consider how Paul Bogard uses

  evidence, such as facts or examples, to support claims.

  reasoning to develop ideas and to connect claims and evidence.

  stylistic or persuasive elements, such as word choice or appeals to emotion, to add power to the ideas express

  Adapted from Paul Bogard, “Let There Be Dark.” ©2012 by Los Angeles Times. Originally published December 21, 2012.

  At my family’s cabin on a Minnesota lake, I knew woods so dark that my hands disappeared before my eyes. I knew night skies in which meteors left smoky trails across sugary spreads of stars. But now, when 8 of 10 children born in the United States will never know a sky dark enough for the Milky Way, I worry we are rapidly losing night’s natural darkness before realizing its worth. This winter solstice, as we cheer the days’ gradual movement back toward light, let us also remember the irreplaceable value of darkness.

  文章开头作者讲述个人儿时经历的美好的夜空,后面通过转折对比提出全篇主题,即我们应该去保留美妙的黑暗的夜空。

  All life evolved to the steady rhythm of bright days and dark nights. Today, though, when we feel the closeness of nightfall, we reach quickly for a light switch. And too little darkness, meaning too much artificial light at night, spells trouble for all.

  段落结尾提出现如今夜晚有太多的人工照明,影响了黑暗的夜空。再次进一步解释了首段主题。

  Already the World Health Organization classifies working the night shift as a probable human carcinogen, and the American Medical Association has voiced its unanimous support for “light pollution reduction efforts and glare reduction efforts at both the national and state levels.” Our bodies need darkness to produce the hormone melatonin, which keeps certain cancers from developing, and our bodies need darkness for sleep. Sleep disorders have been linked to diabetes, obesity, cardiovascular disease and depression, and recent research suggests one main cause of “short sleep” is “long light.” Whether we work at night or simply take our tablets, notebooks and smartphones to bed, there isn’t a place for this much artificial light in our lives.

  再次通过引用官方权威机构来加强主题,即人们需要夜晚的黑暗来帮助睡眠及夜班对人们身体有害。通过具体列举不规律睡眠带来的一些症状加强了主题。

  The rest of the world depends on darkness as well, including nocturnal and crepuscular species of birds, insects, mammals, fish and reptiles. Some examples are well known—the 400 species of birds that migrate at night in North America, the sea turtles that come ashore to lay their eggs—and some are not, such as the bats that save American farmers billions in pest control and the moths that pollinate 80% of the world’s flora. Ecological light pollution is like the bulldozer of the night, wrecking habitat and disrupting ecosystems several billion years in the making. Simply put, without darkness, Earth’s ecology would collapse....

  通过开头引出该段中心句,即除了人们需要黑暗的夜晚之外,其它生物物种也需要黑夜来帮助它们迁徙,产卵及生存。该段利用平行结构的例证方法对中心句进行支持,论据内容充分而有说服力,很值得学习。

  In today’s crowded, louder, more fast-paced world, night’s darkness can provide solitude, quiet and stillness, qualities increasingly in short supply. Every religious tradition has considered darkness invaluable for a soulful life, and the chance to witness the universe has inspired artists, philosophers and everyday stargazers since time began. In a world awash with electric light...how would Van Gogh have given the world his “Starry Night”? Who knows what this vision of the night sky might inspire in each of us, in our children or grandchildren?

  中心句提出黑暗的夜空也激发了很多艺术家进行艺术创作,列举梵高的“星空”很好的进行了支持。因为是著名的作品,起到了与读者的共鸣。

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